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Disabled Reverberation

sightless darkness smirks across grinning deck flesh flies deaf ears, silence smiles

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/5/2017 3:41:00 PM

It sounds like a dead body waiting to be found Joseph...am I being to literal? Where is the rest of the haibun? My imagination on this imagery gave me chills. : )

Joseph Soper
Date: 8/5/2017 9:57:00 PM

The image I had in mind when writing this was a little screwy but had to put it to pen... something popped up on the internest about Hellen Keller and I had odd vision of her try to play the piano. Sorry mislabeled as Haibun, should have been senyru

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/2/2017 5:06:00 AM

This is an intriguing and remarkable write! Such a sad tone within this poem, but accented very well! I enjoyed reading this fine piece this morning! Great Work!!

Joseph Soper
Date: 8/2/2017 5:16:00 AM

thanks for kind feedback... this was written as a little bit of dark humor... or at least my take on it. will leave explanation of inspiration for a few days, kind of want to see how it is interpreted...