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Dirty Wet Diaper

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                                            Dirty wet diaper
                               Sores, scabs, matted hair, crying
                                           Lady adopts_mom


Contest:"Senryu For Mom"
Sponsor:Francine Roberts



(My mother said that
when she first saw me
I had a dirty wet diaper
sores, and backed up against
her and called her mom.)

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 5/9/2011 1:27:00 AM Many congrats Sara for coveted big win in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 5/8/2011 6:57:00 PM yup I know that must have done her in for sure! A heart throbber, Sara Login to Reply

George Aul Date: 5/7/2011 1:25:00 PM Great write for your win.......George p.s. - I was adopted, too! Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 5/4/2011 2:02:00 PM Congrats my dear Sara!!!! well written and lovely... Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 5/4/2011 1:41:00 PM Many congratulations on your win, Sara : ) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/4/2011 12:51:00 PM Congratulations Sara on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol Login to Reply

George Aul Date: 5/4/2011 12:23:00 PM Congrats on a well deserved win....George Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/4/2011 12:07:00 PM Sara, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your success with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 5/4/2011 11:57:00 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest Sara ;) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/4/2011 10:34:00 AM Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Sara Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/4/2011 4:39:00 AM Amazing write Sara.Congrats on your win-kashinath Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/3/2011 11:38:00 PM Hey, I enjoyed reading the story below the poem. Congrats on your win and this was an unusual one that I enjoyed. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/3/2011 11:03:00 PM i really liked tis the first time i read it, sara.. so emotive... happy cheers for the big win! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/3/2011 9:14:00 PM Congrats Sara my friend on your special big win in Francine's contest on Mom.. terrific write .. enjoy a wonderful win.. excellent piece..luv.. Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 5/3/2011 8:57:00 PM Many warm congrats for this win. Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 5/3/2011 6:30:00 PM congratulations on your win.. cory Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 5/3/2011 5:47:00 PM congrats on your 9th place win Sara with this true insight into what a mom is Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 5/3/2011 10:03:00 AM nicely done as always. I have enjoyed it a lot..cory Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 5/1/2011 7:23:00 AM Been there and done it with Diapers Sara. Thank goodness these days are behind me, if you pardon the pun. Have a lovely Sunday....:) Login to Reply

Dixie Fallin Date: 5/1/2011 12:44:00 AM You know Francine..sometimes fewer words in a poem speaks volumes!...This is one of those..Good Job!.....SugarbearUSA Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/30/2011 7:57:00 AM What a sweet story of how you found a loving hme, Sara : ) Login to Reply

Louis Rams Date: 4/28/2011 9:55:00 AM i tip my hat to you for these words have touched my heart too. they mention that you was adopted, and i wondered if you read my poem" adopted" which i think transcends to so many people and society. always the best to you ! Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/28/2011 7:40:00 AM Are you adopted? I had to read Carolyn Devonshire's comment to understand the poem. I think that's great - she adopted you, or you adopted her. Whatever. Love, daver Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/28/2011 4:45:00 AM ohh, this tugs my heart, sara.. you filled up the page with loving gentleness in just a few words.. i'm sure you love you mom as much as she loves you... amazing with winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/27/2011 1:04:00 PM You were lucky to find a loving home, Sara. This tribute to your adoptive mother is beautiful! Children seem to know when they are loved. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

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