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Dirty Little Creeks

limericks float in dirty little creeks a sucker punch to the face of peace similar to silent farting in a lacy wedding party a bottom of the barrel poetry

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Anthony Biaanco

Date: 3/7/2019 8:15:00 PM

Hi Jan, I think there's room for all forms of poetry and I do enjoy a good limerick as well as trying my hand at one every now and then. Bottom of the barrel maybe to harsh, maybe juvenile would have been more appropriate, but that IS the nature of a limerick or am I missing something? Best wishes, Anthony

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2019 7:30:00 PM

I can't disagree with you more with that final line Anthony but each to our own with our writing style if we all wrote sonnets it would be pretty boring!:-) hugs Jan xx