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dirty little creeks

limericks float in dirty little creeks
a sucker punch to the face of peace
similar to silent farting
in a lacy wedding party 
a bottom of the barrel poetry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/7/2019 8:15:00 PM
Hi Jan, I think there's room for all forms of poetry and I do enjoy a good limerick as well as trying my hand at one every now and then. Bottom of the barrel maybe to harsh, maybe juvenile would have been more appropriate, but that IS the nature of a limerick or am I missing something? Best wishes, Anthony
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Date: 3/7/2019 7:30:00 PM
I can't disagree with you more with that final line Anthony but each to our own with our writing style if we all wrote sonnets it would be pretty boring!:-) hugs Jan xx
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