Home » Poems » Anthony Bianco » Dirty Little Creeks

Dirty Little Creeks

limericks float in dirty little creeks
a sucker punch to the face of peace
similar to silent farting
in a lacy wedding party 
bottom-of-the-barrel poem?

poetrylimerick

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Anthony Bianco

March 7, 2019 at 8:15 PM

Hi Jan, I think there's room for all forms of poetry and I do enjoy a good limerick as well as trying my hand at one every now and then. Bottom of the barrel maybe to harsh, maybe juvenile would have been more appropriate, but that IS the nature of a limerick or am I missing something? Best wishes, Anthony

Jan Allison

March 7, 2019 at 7:30 PM

I can't disagree with you more with that final line Anthony but each to our own with our writing style if we all wrote sonnets it would be pretty boring!:-) hugs Jan xx

Dirty Little Creeks

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources