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Dirty Clothes

A washing machine is useful My shirts need all the help they can get I get them dirty easily Machine must work overtime to clean I hope to keep my shirts spotless Likely I’ll need the washing machine Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/26/2012 1:27:00 PM
If your machine is not working, then get all the quarters you can find and go to the nearest laundromat. That's what my brother has to do since his washing machine broke down. This is a nice set of crystallines, Russell.
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Date: 1/23/2012 10:02:00 PM
my old machine keeps giving me fluff, just punch it out clean the filter nuff...
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Date: 1/23/2012 7:09:00 PM
That gets worse as one gets older..For some reason I manage to get food spills on my shirts now that I am older..Enjoyed reading this eve..You review of my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2012 5:33:00 PM
:) This is really cute, Russell. Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:40:00 PM
LOL, I enjoyed this witty piece, my friend
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:34:00 PM
Very awesome poem here! Thanks a mill for sharing! Always, Laura
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Date: 1/23/2012 9:03:00 AM
cute and clever write Russell.. today is my wash day too.. so we will bee washing buddies while writing poetry luv.. thankxxx for enjoying my Clerihew.. a fun game on PS..luv..
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Date: 1/23/2012 1:03:00 AM
Nice one Russell enjoyed reading your poem about machine..........spandan
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:19:00 PM
Where would we be without them- oh yes up to our elbows in suds- great little right and I am with you on washing machines!!
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/22/2012 10:20:00 PM
Great little write- right!
Date: 1/22/2012 10:13:00 PM
YOu sure do love your washing machine, my friend. Well, washing machines deserve poems written about them too!! goodnight now, I think it's almost time for me to get off for the night!!
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:11:00 PM
better to have them hand-washed, russell.lol... you delight me by putting much charm to daily life occurences!..:) huggs!
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