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Dirt In Your Life

Clean your only life
Tidy your glorious soul
Be with cleanliness
Brush your dirty hair firmly
Sweep out all the dirt away

Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

May 15, 2012 at 8:35 PM

Great advice. And to do it firmly!!

Joann Grisetti

May 15, 2012 at 7:04 PM

This sounds like me after I've been camping, although I go to be away from all that ritual we do daily. Like this a lot.

Jack Horne

May 15, 2012 at 11:08 AM

a very deep write indeed, Russell

Nette Onclaud

May 15, 2012 at 9:37 AM

ohh, this kind of cleansing rite is a pure soul's request, dear russell... " brush your dirty hair firmly" has a profound poetic tone; i am awed as always with your clear yet vivid images... :) hugggs!