Directions Needed

An eager man sought information
on fiddlers and frogs. Consternation
had muddled his head.          
“Can’t help you,” I said.
He eyed me with disapprobation!

“You DON’T know?” he said, unbelieving.           
Insulted, I planned on deceiving.							 
I spun a wild plot 
but told him “It’s not
made up." Such a tale I was weaving:

“A frog and a fiddler switched places.
Their antics brought smiles to the faces
of all those nearby—”
Then came his outcry:
“This tale is the worst of disgraces!”

Just why did he voice his objections?
He lacked the correct recollections
for finding this bar
that wasn’t too far.
Turns out he just wanted directions!*

*He was looking for Frog and Fiddler, a pub/bar in
Northampton, England (now closed permanently).


January 19, 2023
written for The Fiddler and the Frog Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Interesting lines penned. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 8:52 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Haha, oh boy, that would certainly be something to see. Good luck in the contest.
Canerdy Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Thanks so much, M. L. Janice
Delaney Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 10:48 AM
OH Yes The old frog and Fiddler Pub. Nice twist. Cheers, SuZ
Canerdy Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Suzanne. Sometimes I do a little research for a poem. I've learned lot through the years! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 12:07 AM
Lol great string of limericks Janice, hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Having a great year, Tom. Hope you are too. THANKS so much for this comment! Janice
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