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It feels as though time itself, Is slipping from my grasp, Like I’m walking atop eggshells, Across butterfly wings, And along the shattered and broken glass There never seems to be enough time It’s like a marathon for me All I want is to finish this climb And stand tall for all to see With all that’s going on right now, These hard times seem to linger Like I’m rushing in a race, Against the ever changing current And these memories in time are slipping, Like sand trickling down the narrow hourglass, Right through my desperate fingers My vision seems to be constantly refocusing Unsure about what is real Switching between health and sickness I don’t know how to feel I look to the 7 directions The brainless scarecrow pointing me every which way sometimes I feel like the cowardly lion, running from the slightest sight of trouble I tried looking north, but my compass is bent I tried looking east, but I was blinded by the light I tried looking south, but walking back into the past is not a mistake I prefer to make I tried looking west, to the stars, for answers, But all I got were twinkling lights and momentary freedom, Before darkness engulfed my thoughts I tried looking up, silently begging for a direction to turn to I tried looking down, to see things from above Finally, I tried looking within, and found something worth working towards So god bless this broken road I’ve been traveling Hanging on by a thread, just getting by each day For had I not fallen down and gotten roughed up a bit I never would’ve gotten strong enough to get back up

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Date: 6/25/2016 11:27:00 PM
GOOD ONE, G H....SKAT
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Date: 2/10/2016 2:16:00 AM
Hi Gianna. I got upset from your uncertainty. I don’t know you,I am a guy that would like to help your broken road. There is an old Persian belief that says for everything, we should take seven steps, it should always go in order: 1- desire/demand 2- love/passion 3- knowledge/wisdom 4 -independence / disdain 5- unity/solidarity 6- astonishment/ perplexity 7- deprivation / death. Think about them, I hope it can help you. Pashang
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Gianna Hogen
Date: 2/10/2016 2:20:00 PM
Thank you very much for the advice, but this is a fairly old poem of mine that I wrote when I was uncertain and lost on the path I was taking at the time. I posted it to reminent me to take those seven steps if I ever get lost again. I'very found my way now. So thank you, I appreciate you offering to help.:)

Book: Shattered Sighs