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Direct Hit

It’s a direct hit
Going down in flames by you
Kamikaze: ME

Eileen Manassian Ghali

suicidesenryu

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Bl Devnath

October 19, 2013 at 12:55 PM

Don't compel to commit suicide with the flames of sweet heart. Lovely done a beautiful haiku. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

October 18, 2013 at 11:56 AM

love it when we make a fool of ourselves, eileen... this is incredible; don;t shoot, lol..:) huggs

John Loving Iii

October 17, 2013 at 1:02 PM

egomanic.

Eileen Manassian

October 18, 2013 at 10:18 AM

Thank you??? :) I'm not that, am I?

Richard Lamoureux

October 17, 2013 at 7:47 AM

I can relate, I have shot myself down many times.

Eileen Manassian

October 18, 2013 at 10:19 AM

This poem was trying to portray, getting shot by someone...and then...as you are going down in flames, you become a suicide bomber and take the bomber out!!! I don't know if that came across well enough, but that was the intention. Thanks for the visit. Never shoot yourself down, Richard.....

Richard D Seal

October 16, 2013 at 10:56 AM

You missed an r and an e out my little Desert Orchid, I'm sure that should read 'kamikrazee Me' lol Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian

October 18, 2013 at 10:20 AM

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! Good attempt at humor, Mr Seal...I am NOT crazy...well, not at the moment of posting this comment. HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!