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Direct Hit

It’s a direct hit
Going down in flames by you
Kamikaze: ME

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Bl Devnath

Date: 10/19/2013 12:55:00 PM

Don't compel to commit suicide with the flames of sweet heart. Lovely done a beautiful haiku. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/18/2013 11:56:00 AM

love it when we make a fool of ourselves, eileen... this is incredible; don;t shoot, lol..:) huggs

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/17/2013 1:02:00 PM

egomanic.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:18:00 AM

Thank you??? :) I'm not that, am I?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/17/2013 7:47:00 AM

I can relate, I have shot myself down many times.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:19:00 AM

This poem was trying to portray, getting shot by someone...and then...as you are going down in flames, you become a suicide bomber and take the bomber out!!! I don't know if that came across well enough, but that was the intention. Thanks for the visit. Never shoot yourself down, Richard.....

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/16/2013 10:56:00 AM

You missed an r and an e out my little Desert Orchid, I'm sure that should read 'kamikrazee Me' lol Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:20:00 AM

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! Good attempt at humor, Mr Seal...I am NOT crazy...well, not at the moment of posting this comment. HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!