Dip and Sway

dip and sway nature's ballet wind leads the trees in dance

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Matthew Anish

Date: 7/2/2011 7:51:00 PM

Fine short poem. Not exactly in haiku form but that matters little because you have captured nature's spirit in a few well chosen words. Yours Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2011 7:15:00 PM

I love this rhyming haiku of personification, Francine. It's excellent!

Constance La France

Date: 7/1/2011 4:29:00 PM

so visual and lovely, and Francine, thanks so much for my 3rd place in your Blue contest, I am just thrilled, yes I do think I could write a romance novel and I would dedicate it to you~~

Cory Long

Date: 7/1/2011 4:09:00 PM

I love nature it is so beautiful just like your write. cory

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/1/2011 4:03:00 PM

I love the way the wind makes the trees dance. Excellent write Francine. love phyl

The Fringe

Date: 6/30/2011 7:43:00 PM

So true how the winds of change are forever flowing and nonstop. Also, the tree's relationship goes hand in hand making it a portrait of beauty. Lovely write.

Don Johnson

Date: 6/30/2011 4:07:00 PM

Yes Francine, cross the pacafic, tween, sweet romance an posies, cooler here, cuddle weather dear, and passion sorta frozes, love, Don