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Dip and Sway

dip and sway

nature's ballet

wind leads the trees in dance

naturehaiku

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Matthew Anish

July 2, 2011 at 7:51 PM

Fine short poem. Not exactly in haiku form but that matters little because you have captured nature's spirit in a few well chosen words. Yours Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

July 1, 2011 at 7:15 PM

I love this rhyming haiku of personification, Francine. It's excellent!

Constance La France

July 1, 2011 at 4:29 PM

so visual and lovely, and Francine, thanks so much for my 3rd place in your Blue contest, I am just thrilled, yes I do think I could write a romance novel and I would dedicate it to you~~

Cory Long

July 1, 2011 at 4:09 PM

I love nature it is so beautiful just like your write. cory

Phyllis Babcock

July 1, 2011 at 4:03 PM

I love the way the wind makes the trees dance. Excellent write Francine. love phyl

The Fringe

June 30, 2011 at 7:43 PM

So true how the winds of change are forever flowing and nonstop. Also, the tree's relationship goes hand in hand making it a portrait of beauty. Lovely write.