Dip

seamless water flows
   just as nature intended
         as I skinny dip


13/08/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2019 at 6:52 PM

oh to answer your question way below. YES, it's so nice!!

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2019 at 6:51 PM

so cute! Congrats, Jean.

Jean Murray

January 31, 2019 at 3:16 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 29, 2019 at 8:21 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

January 29, 2019 at 12:05 PM

Thank you Sunshine.

Tania Kitchin

January 28, 2019 at 7:56 PM

Jean what a fun take on the contest, congratulations on your winning placement!

Jean Murray

January 29, 2019 at 1:49 AM

Gosh Tania, I didn't expect to place at all and I am so glad you saw the fun in it. Thank you.

Line Gauthier

January 28, 2019 at 7:30 PM

Quite the revealing imagery, Jean. I love it!

Jean Murray

January 29, 2019 at 1:53 AM

Good morning Line. What would be the opposite of "A sight for sore eyes?"I think I have reached that category now perhaps.

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 1, 2018 at 6:57 PM

Hello Jean, I like this poem. enjoy the water. Have a nice evening my friend.

Jean Murray

September 2, 2018 at 1:12 AM

Good morning Darlene. Thank you for stopping by last evening.

Viv Wigley

August 22, 2018 at 10:55 PM

I did it once in a river, Jean. A Pike came up close, but wasn't interested. That was a blow to my ego, I can tell you :( . Love the Haiku. Viv x

Jean Murray

August 23, 2018 at 4:08 AM

Close to what exactly?

Sara Kendrick

August 21, 2018 at 3:34 PM

I like your Haiku. I haven't ever skinny dipped but I would think it would be cool. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Jean Murray

August 21, 2018 at 3:49 PM

You are only young twice Sara, so you should give it a go.

Connie Marcum Wong

August 20, 2018 at 4:00 PM

What a charming haiku Jean. This was a winner for me! : )

Jean Murray

August 20, 2018 at 4:48 PM

Thank you for saying so Connie.

Gregory Richard Barden

August 18, 2018 at 4:56 AM

Oh, this is delightful, and so charming ... I love your take on the theme, and this should have placed, (IMHO) ... going in my favs! (Used to have a big in-ground pool and a camp on the lake, and I so miss "au naturale" swims right before bedtime - slept like a baby). Wonderful, Jean! :-) <3

Jean Murray

August 18, 2018 at 6:26 AM

Sounds divine!

Andrea Dietrich

August 15, 2018 at 3:44 PM

I really like this one, how natural it is to do (I actually did it once, but nobody was around except for hubbie)

Jean Murray

August 15, 2018 at 5:12 PM

It is nice, isn't it Andrea?

Eve Roper

August 15, 2018 at 3:19 PM

I can just see you skinny dipping in the river or stream :) I hope they are crystal clear and aqua blue... The imagery is fantastic , Jean.. Hugs dear friend

Jean Murray

August 15, 2018 at 5:11 PM

It's the open sea for me Eve.

Warren Doll

August 15, 2018 at 1:51 PM

Jean, you made me laugh out loud with this brilliant haiku. Well done.

Jean Murray

August 15, 2018 at 1:52 PM

Well that's good Warren because it failed to place in the contest. I like it too, so I'm not going to delete it.Thank you.

Pashang Salehi

August 14, 2018 at 6:26 PM

Jean, you're so magnificent.

Jean Murray

August 15, 2018 at 8:12 AM

Yes I do. x

Pashang Salehi

August 15, 2018 at 2:43 AM

LOL... You know I love you...

Jean Murray

August 15, 2018 at 1:14 AM

Pashang.....have you been a peeping Tom?? Tell me...which evening were you hiding in the bushes??

Jajosh Ongado

August 14, 2018 at 5:04 PM

Wherever this is, I want to be there, haha!

Jean Murray

August 14, 2018 at 5:10 PM

End of day at my local beach. Footprints only in the sand. No one walking hand in hand. Sun in the distance, I'm in shade. I wade in, unafraid. OMG that familiar feeling. Water so cool, my head is reeling. In a little while I adjust. No one to see my naked bust, as I splash and dive to the sea bed. Then with a gulp, I raise my head. Such fun and frolicks all alone. Then I quickly dress and hurry home.