Dip

seamless water flows just as nature intended as I skinny dip 13/08/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2019 6:52:00 PM

oh to answer your question way below. YES, it's so nice!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2019 6:51:00 PM

so cute! Congrats, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 1/31/2019 3:16:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2019 8:21:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 1/29/2019 12:05:00 PM

Thank you Sunshine.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/28/2019 7:56:00 PM

Jean what a fun take on the contest, congratulations on your winning placement!

Jean Murray
Date: 1/29/2019 1:49:00 AM

Gosh Tania, I didn't expect to place at all and I am so glad you saw the fun in it. Thank you.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/28/2019 7:30:00 PM

Quite the revealing imagery, Jean. I love it!

Jean Murray
Date: 1/29/2019 1:53:00 AM

Good morning Line. What would be the opposite of "A sight for sore eyes?"I think I have reached that category now perhaps.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/1/2018 6:57:00 PM

Hello Jean, I like this poem. enjoy the water. Have a nice evening my friend.

Jean Murray
Date: 9/2/2018 1:12:00 AM

Good morning Darlene. Thank you for stopping by last evening.

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/22/2018 10:55:00 PM

I did it once in a river, Jean. A Pike came up close, but wasn't interested. That was a blow to my ego, I can tell you :( . Love the Haiku. Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 8/23/2018 4:08:00 AM

Close to what exactly?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2018 3:34:00 PM

I like your Haiku. I haven't ever skinny dipped but I would think it would be cool. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Jean Murray
Date: 8/21/2018 3:49:00 PM

You are only young twice Sara, so you should give it a go.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2018 4:00:00 PM

What a charming haiku Jean. This was a winner for me! : )

Jean Murray
Date: 8/20/2018 4:48:00 PM

Thank you for saying so Connie.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/18/2018 4:56:00 AM

Oh, this is delightful, and so charming ... I love your take on the theme, and this should have placed, (IMHO) ... going in my favs! (Used to have a big in-ground pool and a camp on the lake, and I so miss "au naturale" swims right before bedtime - slept like a baby). Wonderful, Jean! :-) <3

Jean Murray
Date: 8/18/2018 6:26:00 AM

Sounds divine!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2018 3:44:00 PM

I really like this one, how natural it is to do (I actually did it once, but nobody was around except for hubbie)

Jean Murray
Date: 8/15/2018 5:12:00 PM

It is nice, isn't it Andrea?

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2018 3:19:00 PM

I can just see you skinny dipping in the river or stream :) I hope they are crystal clear and aqua blue... The imagery is fantastic , Jean.. Hugs dear friend

Jean Murray
Date: 8/15/2018 5:11:00 PM

It's the open sea for me Eve.

Warren Doll

Date: 8/15/2018 1:51:00 PM

Jean, you made me laugh out loud with this brilliant haiku. Well done.

Jean Murray
Date: 8/15/2018 1:52:00 PM

Well that's good Warren because it failed to place in the contest. I like it too, so I'm not going to delete it.Thank you.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/14/2018 6:26:00 PM

Jean, you're so magnificent.

Jean Murray
Date: 8/15/2018 8:12:00 AM

Yes I do. x

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/15/2018 2:43:00 AM

LOL... You know I love you...

Jean Murray
Date: 8/15/2018 1:14:00 AM

Pashang.....have you been a peeping Tom?? Tell me...which evening were you hiding in the bushes??

Jajosh Ongado

Date: 8/14/2018 5:04:00 PM

Wherever this is, I want to be there, haha!

Jean Murray
Date: 8/14/2018 5:10:00 PM

End of day at my local beach. Footprints only in the sand. No one walking hand in hand. Sun in the distance, I'm in shade. I wade in, unafraid. OMG that familiar feeling. Water so cool, my head is reeling. In a little while I adjust. No one to see my naked bust, as I splash and dive to the sea bed. Then with a gulp, I raise my head. Such fun and frolicks all alone. Then I quickly dress and hurry home.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2018 5:29:00 PM

lol jean your humour shines out my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 8/13/2018 5:43:00 PM

Hi Jan. I take my skinny dipping seriously, don't you??