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Dinosaur Dance

Dinosaurs just loved to take the floor and dance On tippy toes the size of garden sheds And when they did they’d sashay strut and prance Harmonic beats would shake Jurassic beds They tripped the light fantastic verging heavy Their favourite moves were known as the galumphs You’d find them all way down upon the levee In tutus and industrial grade pumps Brontosauri would impress with pirouettes Making small tornados interspersed with gales But the T Rex topped it all doing entrechats Causing seismic action gauged on Richter scale Their performances gave them renowned distinction Although some say that it led to their extinction 6/20/2019

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Date: 7/6/2019 7:26:00 AM
such a cute poem Geoffrey congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/13/2019 5:03:00 AM
ThNk you, Jan.
Date: 6/27/2019 9:38:00 AM
I'm ecstatic about this one. A FAVE for sure. Such a serendipitous blend of the delightful, the historical, and the graceful --all rolled into one... I think that you should enter this into Line Gauthier's contest (Dinosaurs for kids poems). Sure, there are big words and advanced concepts, but kids NEED to be challenged, and once understood, kids will come back to this again and again and again. They might even learn something. (Is that against the law today? LOL). Super write! :) gw
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/27/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind and generous comments, Gershon. I had similar thoughts about demanding too much for a kids’ poem, but came to the same conclusion as you
Date: 6/23/2019 9:34:00 PM
adorably clever!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/24/2019 7:49:00 AM
Many thanks, P.S.
Date: 6/22/2019 7:48:00 AM
Ha ha, this is cute and fun. Thanks for your visit Geoffrey.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/24/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, Richard