Dinner Photo Time Lapse

Lanterns all shining.
                      While we were just dining.
                      The champagne, sparkling!


                              10/1/2021
               
                        …Rhymed Senryu…
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Roy Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 7:37 PM
So nicely penned. Enjoyed the read. God bless you.
Romios Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Pratap, oh good! Thank you for letting me know this, Appreciatively, Pangie
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October 2, 2021 at 12:40 PM
Few words with much said. "Beautiful" Love This One. Have a blessed day...............
Romios Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Hi Paula. I too, like this:)))) Thank you Paula. Pangie
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October 1, 2021 at 4:30 PM
A perfect moment -- love Champagne, and all sorts of sparklers: eyes, beautiful garments. Life could be paradise for all of us...if just a few more of us would work toward that goal. Well, maybe a whole bunch more of us. Despite the declining state of affairs in the world, I still believe it is possible.
Romios Avatar
October 2, 2021 at 7:32 AM
You, are a sparkling Poet who understands me. I do thank you The bubbles are plentiful in your life and Ila’s. I think you afeboth blessed. People are quite selfish. Not only in life ....but here Pangie....
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Hello Panagiota, a lovely imaginary poem. i read it 4 times. Hugs.
Romios Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:55 AM
I meant Darlene,,,rhymed Haikus and Senrus get few comments compared tithe usual unrhymed ones. Maybe poets don’t know there are rhymed ones? Or prefer the unrhymed? Silly, if you ask me, Pangie
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October 5, 2021 at 9:49 AM
I meant to say the Tyburn, Light Verse look hard to do. Hugs.
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October 2, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Oh Panagita, the Tyburn , Light Verse, Lyric, and more loks hard So I do not bother with them.Hugs.
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October 2, 2021 at 11:13 AM
Hello Pananata, What is wrong with the rhymes, Haiku's Senryus poetry. Why are they disliked? I like haiku's and the Senryu. Will do anoJust wondering. Hugs.ther one of them soon. Why are they unpopular?
Romios Avatar
October 2, 2021 at 7:25 AM
Holy Smoles Rhymed Senryus and Rymdd Haikkus are disliked and unpopular here, too bad .,Darlene. 4 times? Great. Pangie
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