Andrea Dietrich Poet Tetractys

Dinner After the Dance - Tet

I 
dance with
the ocean
jumping blue waves -
soaking in its stretch of sun-drenched beauty

When the sun sinks low, I dine with the sky
as I devour
dusk's hues and
imbibe
peace.

April 26, 2019 for the Tetractys This Poetry Contest of charles messina

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Jack Horne May 16, 2019 at 7:25 AM so glad to see this was a winner - lovely

Eve Roper May 7, 2019 at 4:09 PM Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve

Janice Canerdy May 4, 2019 at 3:37 PM I'm back to say CONGRATS, Andrea! Janice

Alexis Y. May 4, 2019 at 9:21 AM Hi Andrea, What a lovely imagery this poem invokes. It was a pleasure to read you this morning. Congratulations on your fine win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2019 at 8:20 AM - Congratulations, Andrea :)

Joseph May May 4, 2019 at 8:08 AM Dropping back with my Congrats on your win Andrea...

Charles Messina May 4, 2019 at 7:40 AM A beautiful dance after dinner, Andrea. Lovely write as always. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Charlie

Janice Canerdy April 29, 2019 at 8:37 AM So lovely, Andrea--imbibe peace, love that! Janice

Connie Marcum Wong April 28, 2019 at 12:25 PM Wow Andrea I'm sure this will be a winner. I wish that everyone could understand what a blessing poetry is, Sadly they are too busy to take the time. This is going into my Faves Andrea. xxoo Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2019 at 2:37 PM thanks so much for the fave on this one, sweet friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2019 at 1:43 PM - Beautifully written, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi April 27, 2019 at 8:16 AM I loved your imagination on the beaches as you wove the words with such imagery! Thanks for comment on my Gourmand!

Vijay Pandit April 27, 2019 at 7:05 AM A beautiful write..best for a win, Andrea.

Tom Cunningham April 27, 2019 at 1:51 AM Wow, spent three days on mine tweaking it, love the imagery Andrea. Tom

Joseph May April 26, 2019 at 8:36 PM This is lovely Andrea...best wishes..

Winged Warrior April 26, 2019 at 7:05 PM Lovely said my friend...great entry Andrea...this was a fun write...BOL...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}

Arturo Michael April 26, 2019 at 6:52 PM You kept the theme of the write...Nice Tetracty