Dinner

Far-off I hear echoing Approaching my ear The wind- transporting Frequency of the air Ripples on a lake Gently disperse. In a quiet and stagnant Water surface- Jumping fish, Broken silence Twilight that lead; Rowing oar- a boat Fisherman returns The day is done Her eyes are waiting His weary way For: the dinner.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/8/2024 10:03:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2016 8:16:00 AM

HEM RAJ, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/7/2016 1:12:00 AM

Hem, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2013 9:50:00 AM

Nice expressions