Dinas Bran

Dinas Bran

tell your tales 
share them with me
I have travelled far to listen

your walls remaining 
huddle forward like greyed old men
around a warming fire

let me sit quiet as the night
in your moon shaped shadow 
and dream as you do

walk across my thirsty mind
flagons filled with stories
I will not fear your ghosts
they just want to be heard.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/4/2017 6:31:00 AM
You did indeed do justice to Dinas Bran, Patricia! Situated not far from the Horseshoe pass it overlooks the town of Llangollen in Denbighshire. Fantastic description! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/4/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thank you John. If you should ever go there please say hello to the old men.
Date: 11/3/2017 3:29:00 PM
This is so lovely...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/3/2017 7:49:00 PM
thank you Silent One perhaps someday you will visit there and see if I was accurate.
Date: 11/3/2017 1:09:00 PM
Beautiful. Flagons filled with stories for your thirsty mind. Wonderful words from your ever-busy imagination, Patricia.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/3/2017 7:47:00 PM
I would like to be there and really get a feeling for the place. I did it all from imagination, I hope it hit the mark. Thank you I am working on another piece presently.
Date: 11/3/2017 7:47:00 AM
This is delightful. Gorgeous write!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/3/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Dale.
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