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Dimples

He grins, dimples forming small lickable pools of attraction, spreading through my chest like warm charcoal, smoldering little embers, kindled in my heart, spreading a red warm blanket of love in winter cold world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kandpal  Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Wow.....dimples forming small lockable pools of attraction....... U got this real deep.......
White Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Glad you like it :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 7:58 PM
oh what a cutie he must be. Hey, I have dimples (bet you are not interested. heehee) I enjoyed this, Darren.
White Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Well, yes, he is :D ... Cherish your dimples ;)
B. Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 11:34 PM
I don't think I will look at dimples without thinking of your words "dimples forming small lickable pools of attraction" I love this line and love the poem :)
White Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Ever since I know him, that is what's happening to me and dimples too, indeed :D Thanks Carol!
Allison Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 1:33 PM
woohoo this is hot hot hot Darren:-) hugs Jan xx
White Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 1:34 PM
It is ;) Don't burn your feet lol :D
P  Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 6:14 AM
Oh my, most lickable indeed, that warmed me right up this chilly morn! :)
White Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 6:30 AM
Yep! Yumm :)
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