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Dimming Dreams

So scared to peak…fears further grief Lights, she dims, a glance so brief Womanhood stripped-callous thief Dreams are dimmed, hopes attune Cold marquee provides no relief Her name stripped far too soon

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2012 9:48:00 PM

NATILE, congrats with your featured poem of the week.. Good night~PD

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/13/2012 8:41:00 AM

This could be about so many youthful dreams, so shattered by reality! Well done, Natalie...congrats on being featured. Haven't seen your poems for awhile...hope you are doing well!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2012 5:48:00 PM

It could be any number of young starlets. A great topic for a little poem. Congratulations on your win with this interesting poem, Natalie. How are you doing these days?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2012 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win Natalie. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2012 8:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this entry. Good write Natalie.

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/22/2012 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations Natalie, love it. Elizabeth

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/22/2012 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations Natalie. Well done.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2012 7:42:00 AM

congrats Natalie on HM for this superbly crafted poem luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/30/2011 8:05:00 PM

hmm this one makes me want more..it seems like too brief a time with this woman..[always leaveum wanting more!} congrad's Light & Love

Kash Poet

Date: 9/30/2011 4:22:00 PM

Congrats Natalie on your HM in the contest.Enjoyed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2011 4:21:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/30/2011 11:51:00 AM

Congrats Natalie on HM with this brilliant beauty entry luv..enjoy special honor..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 10:08:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your win in Brian's "Verse" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 8/13/2011 7:15:00 AM

A dark write, but not all poetry should be pretty and light. Excellently penned pieceRegards, Robert.

Juanita Smalls

Date: 8/3/2011 10:40:00 PM

very nice.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/20/2011 6:54:00 PM

well done, Natalie. Never have done one of these. looks interesting though and you have made it look easy. Congratulations on your win

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 7/19/2011 11:01:00 AM

What a beautiful write Natalie! You are really talented. Welcome to poetry Soup. -Mohammad

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2011 2:32:00 PM

Many congrats on all your recent wins, Natalie : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/12/2011 12:31:00 PM

Dear Natalie, this is one of the best I've seen for the contest. I can really relate to this woman. As I get older, I dim the lights too. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 7/12/2011 7:14:00 AM

Natalie, a nice ideal for a lovely presentation, Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2011 5:29:00 AM

Congratulations Natalie on your win in the "Rime Couee" contest of Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2011 2:24:00 PM

Congrats Natalie on your fantastic win with this new form and dynamic delight .. expressive beyond compare luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2011 2:06:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, Natalie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2011 1:13:00 AM

hmm, reading this one again, I feel it is saying something that I did not think the first time!! hmmm

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2011 12:33:00 AM

An interesting and tragic theme you used! Good luck with this contest. about the troll dolls. I could just kick myself. at a thrift shop one time I saw a whole bunch of OLD trolls being sold for maybe a hundred bucks. I am talking like 30 of them in a dollhouse too. I bet They would be worth much more than a hundred on Ebay, don't you?

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer
Date: 7/4/2011 10:16:00 AM

Ohh ya Andrea! I am a big fan of thrift stores and I never see them there. That is a pretty good sign that they sell for a decent price online (that and they are easy to ship :)). Thanks for your comments-have a fantastic 4th!!!! Love, Natalie