Diminutive Alice

Diminutive Alice

As Alice in the classic tale
Diminished in a Mason jar
To overlook the natural scene
The middle of a grassy lea

Captured for her sight to see
The butterflies that fly about
Their yellow trails encompass her
Her wonderland she will recall

How do the butterflies react
To see large humans as they set
Upon a leaf to sip and taste
The nectar from a crimson rose

The Alice figure will abide
The time remaining to be seen
The massive Nature in her world
Until the dream has dissappeared

Picture Ths Contest
Image 2
Sponsored by Joseph May
March 23, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 5:27 AM
A delightful fantasy poem, Ralph. I wonder, how would butterflies react? :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
Gentry Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:41 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of the pic.
Sergi Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Thank you, Susan
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations for your win Ralph :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:32 AM
You captured Alice fabulously! Delightful read :) Congratulations! xomo
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:29 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Ralph :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:19 AM
I like the Alice in Wonderland insight of the image..Congrats on your win Ralph..
Sergi Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Thank you for the nice post, Joseph! I was also amazed at all the other great versions both happy and sad.
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:27 PM
what a wonderful interpretation of the image using Alice through the looking glass - fabulous fantasy poem Ralph:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Sergi Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Thank you, Jan: You are perceptive and that is what I was trying to convey.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace