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Diminutive Alice

Diminutive Alice As Alice in the classic tale Diminished in a Mason jar To overlook the natural scene The middle of a grassy lea Captured for her sight to see The butterflies that fly about Their yellow trails encompass her Her wonderland she will recall How do the butterflies react To see large humans as they set Upon a leaf to sip and taste The nectar from a crimson rose The Alice figure will abide The time remaining to be seen The massive Nature in her world Until the dream has dissappeared Picture Ths Contest Image 2 Sponsored by Joseph May March 23, 2018

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Date: 4/3/2018 5:27:00 AM
A delightful fantasy poem, Ralph. I wonder, how would butterflies react? :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of the pic.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/2/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Susan
Date: 4/1/2018 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Ralph :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:32:00 AM
You captured Alice fabulously! Delightful read :) Congratulations! xomo
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Ralph :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:19:00 AM
I like the Alice in Wonderland insight of the image..Congrats on your win Ralph..
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/1/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thank you for the nice post, Joseph! I was also amazed at all the other great versions both happy and sad.
Date: 3/23/2018 6:27:00 PM
what a wonderful interpretation of the image using Alice through the looking glass - fabulous fantasy poem Ralph:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 3/23/2018 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Jan: You are perceptive and that is what I was trying to convey.

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