Diminuendo

March in with a slam 
Awakening from slumber 
Roaring with thunder 
Comes in fiercely like a lion 
Humbly leaves like a lame lamb

March 26, 2023

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich 
Contest: Tankacrostic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 11:40 AM
- "Awakening from slumber" ... comes with mach number ... lovely winning poem, congratulations, Margarita :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 6:11 AM
With a strong lion and a lame lamb beautiful juxtaposition is depicted. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful write. Yes, in like a lion and out like a lamb. "Happy Easter" with blessings...................
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 11:19 AM
I always loved that saying but this year it did not really apply out here. liked the internal rhyming as well. Congrats
Johnson Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:16 PM
Such a clever title. I'm ready to be an April fool. LOL
Lillico  Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:49 PM
Me too, if only for one day ;)
Slaughter Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 2:05 PM
It's been pretty "lamb-like" all month long here...thank goodness. BOL in the contest, Margarita.
Lillico  Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 2:46 PM
I wish I were there, I speak Canadian talk :)
Daniel Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 1:26 AM
Oh yeah! Great one, Margarita:)
Lillico  Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Thank you!
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