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Fevered dreams and anguished thoughts. Running through my head. Darkness creeping ever closer. Just waiting for the chance to engulf my very being. Turn my heart black and withered. Like a rose too long in the sun without water. Soon to crumble like ash in my fingers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/5/2009 9:03:00 AM
I am sure I missed so many amazing poems this past weekend. I enjoyed reading yours today Julie. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2009 11:03:00 AM
Like the comparison between the rose and the anguished thoughts. Keep writing. Sara
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