Dimensions of Love

I thought to analyze this basic stuff
that is existence...taking love apart,
identifying every alias
that I could name.  
There was compassion and humility; 
there was romance in all its ages, 
and upon its fringes lurked desire.   
But that must now be cast aside as faithless,  
though there was compulsion deep within-- 
that may not be denied.  

My vanity in such an exercise
was clear enough, although there was a man 
named Paul who wrote a letter to his friends 
in Corinth--could as well have stopped it 
just as greatness loomed 
to crown his song about a word,  
for with unconscious  eloquence 
he crowned himself with need of nothing more.

Old Paul knew how to say unlovely things
and seldom held his tongue,
but in this thirteenth chapter there emerged
the poet's saint,  a mortal's dawning of
creation's mortar--quintessential truth.

In those post-lightning years he was no less
irascible, but bore within himself
an overflowing heart sustained by that
one ineluctable constraint 
that holds us all together in a spirit sea.
                     ~
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/29/2012 4:23:00 PM
Charlotte, thanks for the compliment, and I always remember with necessary modesty, that deep is not always good. And, I predict that you'll still get lost sometimes when you look at my poetry, but I'm working on it. Hey, I don't think there's anything wrong with "thats" in moderation anyway. It is a useful link and should not be thought of as cliche.
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Date: 7/29/2012 3:37:00 PM
captivated by the title, got lost somewhere in the middle, impressed by the ending :-) your work is very deep and profound, as deep as that spirit sea that holds us together (oh no, those terrible 'thats' keep creeping into my vocab too lol) soup mail for you...
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:43:00 AM
nice poem...congrats!!
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/29/2012 10:58:00 AM
Thank you very much
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