Dimensions

The first dimension gives you length,
Between 2 points so you have strength,
It sets the base upon a field,
So you can trace and start to build...
The second dimension gives us width,
Which gives an object room to drift,
Or in some cases room to grow,
Thats left or right just so you know...
The third dimension gives us space,
So we can move to any place,
With length and width and depth unbound,
This door will move you all around...
The fourth dimension gives us time,
So we can travel any line,
That actions chose by what we sought,
Are fractions broken into thought...
The fifth dimension are the choices,
Screaming like a thousand voices,
While viewing every possible decision,
On one giant screen with all  provisions...
The rest are more of information,
And everything beyond sensation,
So anything beyond the five,
Is beyond the state we call alive...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 8:49 AM
enjoyed reading your work.
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:12 AM
Very informative expressions on the dimensions, Terrence
Palli Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 4:26 AM
i enjoyed that!
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