Dimensional Doors

The door is open.. but don't go in,
You would never get out, it is a curious thing,
You would want to stay forever, and never leave,
About past events, you would never grieve,
In the Harmony, cannot help but believe,
You'll love your brothers, even the thieves,
The last thing is first, and of all things achieved,
The first will be the last, and even they will succeed.

Love is the key..  and faith is the door,
A shelter in a storm, bringing peace, during war,
A beacon burning bright, so to light up the shore,
Eternal riches, filling pockets of the poor,
So if you want proof..  the truth is, it's law,
It doesn't matter if you want to go anymore,
It only ever continues, from what came before,
So behold the future, let us see what's in store.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 3:20 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Craig. Love Carol
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations Craig on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
Lockhart Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 1:14 PM
this is really good. and thanks.
Ali Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 10:20 PM
Enjoyable read
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 5:00 PM
Nice one Craig enjoyed your poem. Welcome to the soup
Slaughter Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Wow! This was really great to read!
Falotico Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 3:06 PM
Nice write on choices and love and faith
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