Doris Culverhouse Poet Etheree

Dime Store Goods

She
frozen
suspended
drowning in fear
an ocean of self
doubt__Who am I kidding??
Myself__loathing artistic
Vagueness and mediocrity
Mass produced inferior talent
Survey says! Forgetable dime store goods...

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Wilma Neels August 27, 2010 at 5:41 AM I'm in Cape Town, South Africa :)

Wilma Neels August 27, 2010 at 5:20 AM This is a very thought provoking write Doris.. We are waving goodbye to winter over here :)

Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2010 at 9:09 PM This is kind of sad. but yes, a lot is like dime store things today. Remember those good old days of dime stores, by the way? And woolworths? Where did THAT go? Nice seeing you today.LUv, Andrea ps It's great to see you trying etheree!!

Carolyn Devonshire August 25, 2010 at 2:55 PM No, not you, Doris. Not dime store goods at all. Accept it! Excellent etheree and you'll have Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn