Dim Daybreak

dim daybreak
     by the city railway
           out of sight


06.26.18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Goff Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 11:19 PM
Love the movement, Moon!
Flower Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 7:29 PM
Thank you, James.
Man Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Moon.. I like what my mind sees!
Flower Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Thank you, LM. I left something on your piece, too. :)
Smith Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Lovely image Moon : )
Flower Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Thank you, Tim. I left a comment on your most recent piece. :)
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