Bryn Strudwick Poet Rhyme

DILEMMA

DILEMMA

I don’t know what to do.
I am supposed to write a Minichu again;
One that’s new.

It’s not easy.
I find the Minichu a pain,
You see

And so
I’ve gone insane
Doh!

I don’t know what to do.
I find the Minichu a pain.
Doh!

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thriveni c mysore August 16, 2024 at 10:08 PM there you go, beautiful again. clever and true. I still remember your double acrostic-feeling of ennui. congratulations dear poet.

Crystol Woods August 15, 2024 at 6:33 AM Hey some humor is unexpected but well received! Awesome writing! Xo

Janice Canerdy August 15, 2024 at 5:48 AM Bryn, CONGRATS on your win with this piece that resonates with me! Janice

Mohan Chutani August 14, 2024 at 9:31 PM Bryn, you wrote this superb Minichu reflecting a general feeling of poets. It was flawless, my dear. Congratulations and keep writing Minichus. not as painful as they are made out to be. Best ..Mohan

Chetta Achara July 26, 2024 at 1:54 PM Yes. The form is more challenging than one would think, but you've done quite a good job with it.