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Dilated Night

when the eternal night blessed our kiss within deep trenches of beauty we held you left the sorrowful night with a hiss, shall forever be a treasure withheld a sheer memory of human nature wondrous night that is forever praised but thoughts like these tend to become glaciers as that day becomes a living record of that night your lips touched upon mine but with memories, some float till the end under the swinging lamp of frozen time with me, you remain forever adored with your ruby fire lips and gold hair in the twilight night we once shared

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Date: 7/18/2012 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Greg. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2011 5:26:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Greg. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2011 9:26:00 PM
Pleasing expressions with a good pen picture, Greg
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Date: 10/21/2011 1:24:00 PM
That was really good and it is nice to know we have men whom enjoy the romance of a time
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