Dilated

To dilate eyes It isn’t wise To feel surprise At pupils’ size. You must surmise This truth applies – The doc relies On such a guise. Don’t analyze Or agonize For facts arise (And that’s the prize). But time sure flies And justifies The sight that lies Within our eyes.

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Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2018 12:04:00 PM

clever title Ilene, i hate having those drops in my eyes - love the rhyme my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/17/2018 4:36:00 AM

great verse that just rolled off the tongue, I must say im struggling with all the different forms on here, it sure is a learning curve. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2018 1:49:00 AM

Oh I forgot to tell you. My eyes have naturally large pupils compared to others. At the prom, my date asked me if I was on drugs. Geeez.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/17/2018 4:36:00 AM

not a chat up line I would have used lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2018 1:48:00 AM

I liked seeing this one tonight, Ilene. Sure do love when you pay me a visit. (the eyes have it!)