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Dignity On Hold

festive flowered front
   finds itself with one scant tie-
         down the hall we go

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2015 at 5:07 PM

David, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA

April 13, 2015 at 8:19 AM

Simply charming senryu! Light & Love

April 12, 2015 at 5:20 PM

Nicely done, David! Congrats on your win! Sandra

April 12, 2015 at 9:17 AM

Congrats on your win David. nicely done.

April 12, 2015 at 5:44 AM

Well did the tie go over your face so no one would recognize you if they saw your face again..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

April 11, 2015 at 10:08 PM

I echo the judge. KEWL!!!

April 11, 2015 at 9:56 AM

Dropping back with my congrats David:-) Hugs jan xx

April 11, 2015 at 8:38 AM

Very KQQL David! Thanks for being in my contest....Love it...

April 11, 2015 at 4:20 AM

So cute and smart! Lovely senryu; should I say 'holding on to dignity'!:) // paul

April 12, 2015 at 11:36 AM

...back with congratulations, David! // paul

April 11, 2015 at 2:49 AM

so elegantly quilled... i like this dancing visual, david.. huggs

April 10, 2015 at 12:43 PM

made me smile! Hugs jan xx

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