Difficult

It's difficult, waking in the morning
Staring at the ceiling, yawning
Having bad feeling, it really hurts 
Nobody seems to understand your problems
It's like a cut
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 12:30 AM
Deep little write...enjoyed
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 5:20 PM
A very fine poem my boy. I'm proud of U.
Alvez Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 12:14 AM
Ah, such a deepy sad feeling you express here...Start your day with a prayer for waking then place your small hand in God's big hand...Not always over night, but prayers are answered...Stay strong! Cynthia
Raphael Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 5:08 AM
thanks Cynthia. You are appreciated
Croft Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 7:38 PM
a cut so deep that no one else understands nor do they care to investigate why. good start on a good song!!!!!
Raphael Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 8:30 AM
thank you Karen. Thank you
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