Dieting

To eat or not to eat
That is the question 
Loosing weight nicely
Despite hungry suggestions 
Ignoring my tummy’s growl
Means my figure won’t be fowl 
So I’ll just write of food
Delay eating an hour or two
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Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 7:55 PM
Easy to say; hard to do. ~ E. Ting's Comforto
Jones Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 2:14 AM
Agreed
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:24 PM
gosh, I'm 'dieting' to....trying to push past the hunger and, of course, the cravings!
Jones Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:28 PM
Oh yes! I just broke down and had sweet potato fries with my salad!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 9:23 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love your "Dieting" with words and not food. Guess I should try it... Have a fun day writing away..........
Jones Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:27 PM
Thanks Paula!
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