Black Eyed Susan Poet Rondeau

Diet Pepsi

actually it's a rondolet, a shortened form of rondeau, but not a seperate category in p.s.

Diet Pepsi
The last drink you afforded me
Diet Pepsi
A silver can, eyeball tempting -
Better than looking at your glee
Strangling me, last image seen
Diet Pepsi


2/23/12

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Poet Destroyer A May 8, 2012 at 9:38 PM taking second looks at your writes Susan:) the taste to me is ummmm flat lol i tried but I just can't:)have yourself a goodnight..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A February 26, 2012 at 11:03 PM Susan, nice... enjoyed..pd