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Died Again Today

When everything seems to go wrong And nothing goes right And you no longer have the will to fight the fight You look around you But all you see is grey And so much sadness fills your day You search for gold But all you find is dust you yearn for love But make do with lust Dreams remain out of reach Sleep my only allie my release I hide myself in the shadows Where the Ravens dwell A place I'm familiar with called hell What happened where did I go wrong Been on my own far too long. Peter Dome. Copyright.2015. June.

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Date: 6/1/2015 3:44:00 PM
Hey I thought about puttin on your boots! Have you tried some of the church group functions? Does a friend know someone? Perhaps ask the friends mother? Bar rooms are not an option...for finding the lady of your dreams...not that you asked for this much information! You sound like someone she would like to spend time with
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Peter Dome
Date: 6/2/2015 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Judy so nice of you to stop by.Yes I've tried all that, didn't work too well, having married women want me in church, no way just not me.I find a lot of girls today just want to have fun and not be faithful yo one man or settle do I have a lot to given like I do. maybe I'm old fashioned, but I need more a lot more. it's so frustrating ans dissolution. thank you so much. best wishes. Pete..
Date: 6/1/2015 2:39:00 PM
We have to go out some night Pete...I'll help you find someone
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Date: 6/1/2015 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Tim. that's my problem. I fear going out at night. when I did a few years ago. all girls wanted was to jump in bed. I'm not that type I need more made me even more depressed. thank you my friend. best wishes. Pete.

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