Die Not My Prime

Dye in white wool of time :
Sweet youth;die not my prime.


Kayod5
Oct.12th,2014.
Contest title: IN ITS ESSENCE.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:58 AM
complex yet beautiful... I like the homo-rhyme!..thanks for making my contest a special one.. congrats!
Kayode Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Nette,it is nice to hear from you.
Kimathi Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Congrats on your great verse, Kayode! :-)
Kayode Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Thank you Teddy.
Smith Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 3:30 PM
A great one...congrats my friend...cheers
Kayode Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Thank you Tim,I am happy to hear from you.
Mohn Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 7:15 PM
Big congrats Kayode on your win
Kayode Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 8:46 PM
Thanks David.
Callus Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:46 PM
Like your reasoning, Kayode...unique take on this them. Congrats on your win. // paul
Kayode Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Immense thanks Paul.
Mehta Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 11:49 AM
Very creative and clever write, Kayod5, congrats
Kayode Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Thank you Dr.
Yvonne Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Great write congratulations on your win.
Kayode Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Thank you Maurice.
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 10:06 AM
excellent write :-) mmmm i love greying men:-) many congrats on your win
Kayode Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Thank you Jan
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win Kayod 5
Kayode Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Thank you Brenda.
Gorelick Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:51 AM
I love this one, Yours make sense..some of those I read do not. BG
Kayode Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Thank you Barbara.
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