Did You Notice

UNSUPPORTED CODE Did You Notice?

Was the fluttering on your cheek the light brush of my lips
Was that soft touch on your hair the back of my fingers
Was that my aroma on the breeze that tickled your nose
Was that the taste of my breath when my mouth hovered over yours

Did your earlobe tingle as I nipped it between my teeth
Did you tremble just a little as I kissed the hollow of your throat
Did you hold your breath in anticipation as my tongue teased your lips
Did you try to snuggle against me as my hands found your waist

Were you aware of my grip on your elbow when your step faltered
Were you surprised to find my unending support when you were in need
Were you pleased as you learned that I that I was real
Were you shocked when my answer to your question was yes

Will you dance to our songs in the darken meadow 
Will you trust in me when your fears try to overcome you
Will you accept my help when no other seems to be there
Will you overlook my shortcomings should I ever disappoint you

Have you noticed how time slows when we steal some time together
Have you felt the moments stretch beyond all reasonable bounds
Have you become frantic when those times cheat and evade us
Have you silently wondered when they will come again

Did you feel my arm as I lay it across your shoulders
Did you feel my lips as I kissed away your tears
Did you feel my bent finger beneath your chin
As I lifted your face to the new morning's sun

© 2014 B. E. Parks							senti  poem
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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