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Did You Notice

UNSUPPORTED CODE Did You Notice? Was the fluttering on your cheek the light brush of my lips Was that soft touch on your hair the back of my fingers Was that my aroma on the breeze that tickled your nose Was that the taste of my breath when my mouth hovered over yours Did your earlobe tingle as I nipped it between my teeth Did you tremble just a little as I kissed the hollow of your throat Did you hold your breath in anticipation as my tongue teased your lips Did you try to snuggle against me as my hands found your waist Were you aware of my grip on your elbow when your step faltered Were you surprised to find my unending support when you were in need Were you pleased as you learned that I that I was real Were you shocked when my answer to your question was yes Will you dance to our songs in the darken meadow Will you trust in me when your fears try to overcome you Will you accept my help when no other seems to be there Will you overlook my shortcomings should I ever disappoint you Have you noticed how time slows when we steal some time together Have you felt the moments stretch beyond all reasonable bounds Have you become frantic when those times cheat and evade us Have you silently wondered when they will come again Did you feel my arm as I lay it across your shoulders Did you feel my lips as I kissed away your tears Did you feel my bent finger beneath your chin As I lifted your face to the new morning's sun © 2014 B. E. Parks senti poem All Rights Reserved

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