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Did You Moan My Name

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the day we wed a tear I shed and said "love you" with love true blue I had my life to be your wife we had such joy when we heard boy a boy in me we would soon see god had a plan for our boy stan born dead and still it was god's will we heard those words with songs of birds our boy was dead you hung your head I lost you then but I found zen you were so sad not to be dad each day was worse soon in a hearse we could not talk you would just walk thoughts in your head my poor heart bled you drove too fast the road was glassed dear, did you moan my name- when thrown _______________________ January 30, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/did you moan my name Copyright Protected, ID 18-9873-51-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, 128 Words sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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James Inman

Date: 3/11/2018 2:45:00 PM

Heart breaking.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/1/2018 6:36:00 PM

Hello Broken Wing this is such a sad poem. it made me cry. have anice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/3/2018 3:35:00 PM

You must miss him very much. Just remember he is in your heart wherever you go.

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:24:00 AM

Darlene, thank you for visiting my poem, yes it is sad, that is what I write the best and what makes this even more sad is that it is true ~

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 2/26/2018 1:15:00 PM

It s a really sad and heartbreaking poem, it really touch my heart and I felt each and every line of it, congrats on your wonderful poem, it was a well deserved win, good luck

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:24:00 AM

Faraz, thank you, thank you for that nice comment and for the congrats ~

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/15/2018 10:46:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Constance - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:25:00 AM

Greg, thank you for the congratulations, yes, I found this contest very challenging to do ~

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 2/5/2018 12:59:00 AM

Congratulations, Constance on your win. So much pathos in the poem, touches the heart.

Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:26:00 AM

Subimal, thank you for visiting and for the congratulations ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/4/2018 7:13:00 PM

Heartbreaking for sure, Constance, but so emotionally well-written with such limited one-syllable words. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2018 7:27:00 PM

Sandra, thank you for the compliment and the congrats !

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/4/2018 6:31:00 PM

I have a lump in my throat. What a troubling emotional write. Breathtaking. Congrats on your well-deserved win. It is so well expressed that I have to FAVE it.

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2018 7:25:00 PM

Line, thank you for the nice comment and congrats !

Silent One

Date: 2/4/2018 3:53:00 PM

A heartbreaking take on the contest BW.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2018 7:24:00 PM

Silent, thank you for the contest and for my placement, honored !

James Swartz

Date: 2/1/2018 11:14:00 PM

Such emotion in everything you write. You put your heart and soul into every word and thought. Good luck in the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2018 8:45:00 AM

James, thank you. And sadly this is true perhaps that is why my heart and soul drips from the words.