Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Did You Moan My Name

the day we wed
a tear I shed
and said "love you"
with love true blue

I had my life
to be your wife
we had such joy
when we heard boy

a boy in me
we would soon see
god had a plan
for our boy stan

born dead and still
it was god's will
we heard those words
with songs of birds

our boy was dead
you hung your head
I lost you then
but I found zen

you were so sad
not to be dad
each day was worse
soon in a hearse

we could not talk
you would just walk
thoughts in your head
my poor heart bled

you drove too fast
the road was glassed
dear, did you moan
my name-  when thrown

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January 30, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/did you moan my name
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Written for the contest, 128 Words
sponsor, Silent One

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James Inman March 11, 2018 at 2:45 PM Heart breaking.

Darlene De Beaulieu March 1, 2018 at 6:36 PM Hello Broken Wing this is such a sad poem. it made me cry. have anice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu March 3, 2018 at 3:35 PM You must miss him very much. Just remember he is in your heart wherever you go. Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:24 AM Darlene, thank you for visiting my poem, yes it is sad, that is what I write the best and what makes this even more sad is that it is true ~

Faraz Ajmal February 26, 2018 at 1:15 PM It s a really sad and heartbreaking poem, it really touch my heart and I felt each and every line of it, congrats on your wonderful poem, it was a well deserved win, good luck Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:24 AM Faraz, thank you, thank you for that nice comment and for the congrats ~

Gregory Richard Barden February 15, 2018 at 10:46 PM Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Constance - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-) Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:25 AM Greg, thank you for the congratulations, yes, I found this contest very challenging to do ~

Subimal Sinha-Roy February 5, 2018 at 12:59 AM Congratulations, Constance on your win. So much pathos in the poem, touches the heart. Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:26 AM Subimal, thank you for visiting and for the congratulations ~

Sandra Haight February 4, 2018 at 7:13 PM Heartbreaking for sure, Constance, but so emotionally well-written with such limited one-syllable words. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Constance La France February 4, 2018 at 7:27 PM Sandra, thank you for the compliment and the congrats !

Line Gauthier February 4, 2018 at 6:31 PM I have a lump in my throat. What a troubling emotional write. Breathtaking. Congrats on your well-deserved win. It is so well expressed that I have to FAVE it. Constance La France February 4, 2018 at 7:25 PM Line, thank you for the nice comment and congrats !

Silent One February 4, 2018 at 3:53 PM A heartbreaking take on the contest BW.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Constance La France February 4, 2018 at 7:24 PM Silent, thank you for the contest and for my placement, honored !

James Swartz February 1, 2018 at 11:14 PM Such emotion in everything you write. You put your heart and soul into every word and thought. Good luck in the contest. Constance La France February 2, 2018 at 8:45 AM James, thank you. And sadly this is true perhaps that is why my heart and soul drips from the words.