Bren A Poet I do not know?

Did You Love Me?

If I can live with you as if nothing went wrong
I would be in denial I'm not sure for how long
You tell me you’re sorry and I do believe
But my mind can’t stop thinking if your truth will deceive
You did it for so long without any remorse
I’m really trying and pray that all this will soon run its course
I love you, I never did stop
But your love I question was it real or not

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Beata Agustin January 29, 2026 at 9:16 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 10, 2016 at 1:06 AM Bren, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Val Clifton March 11, 2010 at 8:21 AM enjoyed reading,welcome!

Carol Sunshine Brown March 11, 2010 at 3:11 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Bren. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Skat A March 10, 2010 at 6:49 PM Love is always a question. Never a great answer. Enjoyed reading ..welcome to the soup...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 10, 2010 at 12:51 PM Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets ..please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight... luv is an awesome thing but can also be hurtful..u have written well on it..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...

Sara Kendrick March 10, 2010 at 12:30 PM Interesting way to present the idea of questionable love.. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara