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Did You Love Me?

If I can live with you as if nothing went wrong I would be in denial I'm not sure for how long You tell me you’re sorry and I do believe But my mind can’t stop thinking if your truth will deceive You did it for so long without any remorse I’m really trying and pray that all this will soon run its course I love you, I never did stop But your love I question was it real or not

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/10/2016 1:06:00 AM
Bren, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 3/11/2010 8:21:00 AM
enjoyed reading,welcome!
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Date: 3/11/2010 3:11:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Bren. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2010 6:49:00 PM
Love is always a question. Never a great answer. Enjoyed reading ..welcome to the soup...
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Date: 3/10/2010 12:51:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets ..please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight... luv is an awesome thing but can also be hurtful..u have written well on it..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...
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Date: 3/10/2010 12:30:00 PM
Interesting way to present the idea of questionable love.. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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