Did You Hear Me
Did you hear me say your name last night?
I spoke from 'top the hill
Drenched in sweat I'd reached the height
Then collapsed and lay there, still
I slept awhile, woke up, and then
Climbed up and reached the peak again
Once was nice but you can bet
Twice was even better yet
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