Did You Care

You grabbed my attention to throw stones
Your stones cut deep and perished what I thought was love
Can’t you see you really mattered?
Can’t you see what took place?
My mind was in a different place
My heart was wide open
My heart let you in and now its broke
I thought you were the one
I absorbed nothing but hate
Hate for myself thinking, I could love once again
Now im forever broken
There is no healing from the loyalty and trust I had
Back to primping and being cruel,
Cruel to never get tricked and distracted by any femme
Fooled by a gender but not the world!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Hello Lemuel Giviens, I see hurt feelings here. I sense the pain you feel. No you do not have to be cruel.It will hurt for awhile. Then you will heal. This girl is not for you. You cando better. Have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 6:09 PM
That is a good start.
Giviens Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Thanks for the comment. Im good at the moment..
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