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Did You Care

You grabbed my attention to throw stones Your stones cut deep and perished what I thought was love Can’t you see you really mattered? Can’t you see what took place? My mind was in a different place My heart was wide open My heart let you in and now its broke I thought you were the one I absorbed nothing but hate Hate for myself thinking, I could love once again Now im forever broken There is no healing from the loyalty and trust I had Back to primping and being cruel, Cruel to never get tricked and distracted by any femme Fooled by a gender but not the world!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/14/2018 2:09:00 PM
Hello Lemuel Giviens, I see hurt feelings here. I sense the pain you feel. No you do not have to be cruel.It will hurt for awhile. Then you will heal. This girl is not for you. You cando better. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/14/2018 6:09:00 PM
That is a good start.
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Lemuel Giviens
Date: 11/14/2018 3:19:00 PM
Thanks for the comment. Im good at the moment..

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