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Did They Remove the Magic Wand

Who took the M out of magic The A followed close behind G didnt want to be left alone I and  C says, please be kind Can we not stick together Why have we drifted away Why aren't we enjoying christmas Who said humbug to this festive  day I know we have lost loved ones Very close  to our heart Did they remove the magic wand Or did the retailers do their part Commercial christmas it is now That should be its new name Gone is the feeling of a family show Its a crying  shame   So as we sit down to eat lunch Spare a thought for people with less Especially the word Magic Who wants to spread happiness So come on smiles on  faces Light the candles  say a prayer.  Cos its christmas day We have magic here

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Date: 12/15/2012 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Seren love. I would have place this higher xx
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Date: 12/15/2012 12:25:00 AM
I really like how you did this topic, Seren, incorporating the word magic right into the poem. Glad to be seeing the winners list and finally see YOUR entry. Congrats for your win. Luv, Andrea
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/15/2012 2:10:00 AM
Thank you Andrea....Seren
Date: 12/14/2012 8:42:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations with your lovely deep win enjoyed the imagery. Goodnight :-) LINDA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/14/2012 10:26:00 PM
Thank you Linda.....Seren
Date: 12/14/2012 6:42:00 PM
thank you' Sandy
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/14/2012 8:09:00 PM
Thank you Sandy
Date: 12/5/2012 11:58:00 PM
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/14/2012 8:10:00 PM
Smiles
Date: 12/5/2012 7:01:00 AM
I agree with you. Christmas is so commercialized today. You may like to read 'Jingle Bells'. The spirit of sharing our wealth and giving from the heart. Warm smiles always, Connie
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/5/2012 10:50:00 PM
Thank you Connie, I certainly will read Jingle Bells.....Seren
Date: 12/5/2012 2:03:00 AM
I can really feel this....I so agree with what you have to say. So here is a smile :o) Just for you.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 12/5/2012 11:27:00 AM
So as we (it) down to eat lunch? Ha,ha,hee,hee.. :o)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/5/2012 2:14:00 AM
Grrrr read the damn thing 6 times, give me a clue lol
Date: 12/5/2012 12:50:00 AM
ooh me first , what a cracker.. lol,,you put some thought into this one and it works well love it xx soup
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