Did It Work?
What Did Or Didn't Happen,
Was It Right?
Was It Perfect,
Did It / Was It
Made Like It
Be Be
Became?
Just Like Expected?
Yeah, I Had To Add
A Little Bit, But
Was It Perfect?
Not Later...
Whatever.
I Mean I Deserved
That... Blah Blah Blah...
PERFECT.
-Gray Squirrel
02-23-2026
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