Did It Move For You, Mrs Richter?

The birds flew up suddenly, one and all



I straightened the paintings upon my wall
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February 16, 2009 at 5:09 PM
This one has me smiling. Such a creative perspective here. Enjoyed it! Karen
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January 3, 2009 at 4:15 AM
sounds like some heavy birds or an earth qauke, will have to think about this all day.
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January 2, 2009 at 6:43 AM
Love the title! Excellent use of this form Nigel! Well done. Love, Shar
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January 2, 2009 at 4:23 AM
Oooo, yup - the earth moved. lol excellent spaces epigram, Nigel, well done. :) LOVE that title. lol Kristin
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