David Kavanagh Poet Tanka

Did I Here a Groan

the goldilocks zone 
     our planet earth we made home 
             where nobody moans
     too hot too cold ~ when in rome 
     my damn porridge find your own 


Goldilocks Zone Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco 
Syllable counter PS 5/7/5/7/7
16/03/2021

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Andrea Dietrich March 18, 2021 at 12:55 PM ha. this is great wit. I need to check out this contest!! David Kavanagh March 18, 2021 at 1:58 PM Go for it Andrea, I’ll keep an eye out, on your postings, thank you so much for looking in, cheers David

Panagiota Romios March 16, 2021 at 1:01 PM Very, very clever, David! And humorous too boot. Panagiota David Kavanagh March 16, 2021 at 1:14 PM A bit of dark humor Pangie, I cannot help myself, cheers David