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(To My Olde Car SDQ2817K, Salute!)
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Today, I sold my car:
Sad story here on par.


Black beauty as years star:
Lavish journeys so far.


Today, I made a change:
Odd feelings now estrange.


Notice my sad feelings:
Awkward thoughts lingering.


Today, I sold my car:
A lovely, distant star.


A faithful friend I know:
My chariot time did show.


Today, I sold my car:
A star that brought me far.


Thank you for taking me:
Through fond journeys and sprees.


Today, I sold my car:
Habit wears a big scar!




Leon Enriquez
04 January 2017
Singapore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 4, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Sweet. Sometimes it can be sad when you have to sell a vehicle that you have loved. I think we are going to have to sell our truck, "Memaw's Chariot" to the junk yard. She has been a longtime useful truck for our family. I will miss her, too.
Enriquez Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 11:02 PM
Dear Dane Ann: Thank you for your kind comments. All the best then, Leon.
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