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Diamonds of My Mind

-The Diamonds of My Mind- 
Even if you call my name 
this is not me you see 
looking back. 
I see the reflection of the someone 
who needs convincing. 
The diamonds of my mind 
remember me from before 
Everything about me is bespoke 
I’m the one who stole last place. 
It’s not me anymore 
I don’t want my lovers back 
They know now like me 
there’s only one secret left 
Hidden in the mystery, 
the changing memories 
life leaves behind. 
But, is it me this morning 
walking like an old man 
while no one is looking. 
I’m the one who jumped out of airplanes, 
I hiked the Tetons, 
I dove into a raging Missouri River, 
and had a Yellowstone Grizzly 
stand up in front of my convertible 
flex his nails, then lumber off. 
Ask Virginia Smart or Jeanie. 
Now these aches 
are the last real connection, 
to a voluble past 
Each has a story to tell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/1/2016 8:16:00 AM
Raymond, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/1/2016 6:33:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Raymond. :)
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Date: 6/30/2016 9:48:00 PM
Raymond, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Date: 6/30/2016 1:24:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Raymond - Very well written - Welcome to Poetry Soup - hugs // Sun :)
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