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Diamonds In Your Eyes

Let me dance your tune, soak our wine Afloat on irises divine, From glint of midnight I believe In charms you bring, and charms you leave, Making me gentle everyday Through fire and rain, time lifts the way, While carats of eyes glow about A diamond’s remnants, no doubt. For never have I felt this flight When dawn wakes my gaze with delight, Then, clutch my hands on mystic trips Down rivers shifting moon’s eclipse; That open light with breaths aglow And glitter tide’s sails made to row; Deeper the years; warmer your face To relish clasps of soft embrace. Contest for Alexis Y...Love Poems ( Make Me Fall In Love With Your Poem)

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Date: 12/17/2015 12:36:00 PM
NETTE, wonderful win. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/15/2015 12:46:00 PM
Nette, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! :-) Alexis
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Date: 1/19/2014 7:15:00 PM
You're such the romantic, Nette. Love it. Poetic hugs, Juliet.
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:28:00 PM
While carats of eyes glow about...awwwsommee ..wonderful dreamy poem nette...congratulations on..your win....:-) :-) :-)
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Date: 1/16/2014 11:58:00 AM
many congrats nette xx
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Date: 1/15/2014 1:15:00 PM
Do I use the phrase...."breath taking" too often? Your poems do that to me !! Congratulations on a well deserved win!
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Date: 1/15/2014 8:45:00 AM
So pretty, congratulations Nette.
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:35:00 PM
Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, nette
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Date: 1/14/2014 4:37:00 PM
Splendid! Congrats on your superb win i n this contest..
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Date: 1/14/2014 3:19:00 PM
A celestial voyage! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 1/14/2014 2:59:00 PM
- Congratulations Nette, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2014 9:31:00 AM
This is so other-worldly and I'm right there with it! So dreamy and soulful..a wonderful poem. BarbaraBoyd
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Date: 1/8/2014 8:19:00 PM
Beautiful poem by you Nette as usual>Enjoyed it.
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Date: 1/8/2014 12:40:00 AM
Very nice job and a certain winner. I felt myself carried along on a gentle wave, rising and falling a bit but always in rhythm with the rhyme.
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Date: 1/7/2014 8:01:00 PM
Your imagery is always powerful with that certain romantic flare. Great work as always.
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:05:00 PM
beautiful..Just beautiful!!!
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Date: 1/7/2014 2:01:00 AM
Wow! Beauty personified! I am really loving this one Nette. You truly are a gem, standing out amongst the poets.
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Date: 1/6/2014 8:22:00 AM
Elegant & brilliant from its core, its heart. Absolutely beautiful!
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Date: 1/6/2014 6:30:00 AM
Simply beautiful! A winner.
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Date: 1/5/2014 11:56:00 PM
So sweet a write, it's soft as silk, great it has a warmth to it even a romantic delicate touch. enjoyed it alot cheri
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Date: 1/5/2014 6:23:00 PM
Mouth music nette :) Light & Love
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Date: 1/5/2014 3:59:00 PM
Reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are always encouraging..I hope that this has been a great day for you...Sara
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Date: 1/5/2014 1:45:00 PM
This is an illustrious and completely wondrous write my friend! Your three boldfaced lines are perfect and incredibly central to your poem! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this afternoon! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/5/2014 12:37:00 PM
beautiful words, Nette. I knew you would do this contest eventually!
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Date: 1/5/2014 10:00:00 AM
Nette, very smooth indeed, I like this a lot…David
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