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Diamonds In Your Eyes

In your eyes, a diamond's remnants
Reflects the beauty of inner contentment

For only when polished, does its beauty show
Like the bright light, of your heart's glow


©Donna Jones
1-2-2014

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John Posey

August 18, 2014 at 10:35 AM

Donna Dearest friend...... I have seen many great posts that make be regret not spending more time reading your creative work.... this is just one of them..... Love Ya Jake

Mustapha Mohammed

May 26, 2014 at 9:17 AM

Dear Donna, this poem is really gorgeous. I was thoroughly engaged from start to finish. I want to take this opportunity to thank you for all the wonderful comments you have placed on my poems in the past. I would be taking them off so I just thought I would acknowledge your kindness before I do.

Richard Lamoureux

February 23, 2014 at 9:06 AM

I enjoyed reading this one again. Happy Sunday!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 7, 2014 at 6:52 AM

Very beautiful. Sweetness as your heart glows through your words, here and in yesterday. Very peaceful!

Chris G. Vaillancourt

January 19, 2014 at 4:59 PM

this is a unique and thought-provoking poem. Nice work!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 16, 2014 at 12:07 PM

many congrats donna xx

Richard Lamoureux

January 15, 2014 at 9:08 AM

This diamond sparkles, congratulations Donna.

Barbara Gorelick

January 14, 2014 at 11:08 PM

Short and oh, so sweet. Congrats. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 14, 2014 at 9:47 PM

Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Donna

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 14, 2014 at 3:02 PM

- Congratulations Donna, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 11, 2014 at 8:28 AM

A wonderful reflection of your inner beauty Donna! It looks like a winner to me. Good luck!

Monterey Sirak

January 9, 2014 at 9:35 AM

Beauty is found inside; inside ourselves and inside your words.

Kelly Deschler

January 8, 2014 at 6:08 PM

Love sure can warm our hearts and make our eyes shine a little brighter! You captured that so beautifully here. Very nicely done, Donna! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem!

Roger Horsch

January 8, 2014 at 2:39 PM

A perfect and I mean perfect poem Donna, It could not be improved on if you tried....Hugs....Roger

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2014 at 12:17 AM

can't believe I never saw this one yet. I really like it, Donna. Short but very sweet!!

Joseph May

January 7, 2014 at 8:51 PM

I enjoyed reading this gem Donna...best wishes

Vesna Kovrlija

January 4, 2014 at 5:10 AM

So original and lovely!

Peter Dome

January 3, 2014 at 9:59 PM

Beautiful. well written and great flow. Well done. Love the metaphor, take care Pete.

Richard Lamoureux

January 3, 2014 at 7:35 PM

I like the idea of a hearts light being refracted from diamond eyes.

Lucilla Carrillo

January 3, 2014 at 5:27 PM

This short, but good. I like the title. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Russell Sivey

January 2, 2014 at 10:11 PM

You have written a warmhearted write here my friend! This is a fabulous poem, the eyes are one of the most beautiful parts of the face, which is coupled with the smile! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this positively glorious piece this evening Donna! What a creative poem, Great Work!!

Donna Jones

January 9, 2014 at 5:12 PM

Well you have beautiful ..both eyes and smile Russell.....thanks for the wonderful compliment....

Cherl Dunn

January 2, 2014 at 9:37 PM

Your lovely words are as the polished gems you have written about great job i really enjoyed this poem my friend, bravo on this special write i read tonight. cheri

Donna Jones

January 9, 2014 at 5:05 PM

Lovely compliment....thank you so much....