Diamonds In Your Eyes

Deep in your eyes,
I see a diamond's remnants,
twinkling like ice
soaked in sunlight....


By: Teddy Kimathi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 8:52 PM
Aahhh beautiful......congratulations..
Kimathi Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 1:29 AM
Thanks Donna :-)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 12:03 PM
many congrats Teddy xx
Kimathi Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 12:05 AM
Thanks Mandy :-)
Gorelick Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 8:59 AM
So pretty, congrats on your win. BG
Kimathi Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 12:06 AM
Thanks Barbara. :-)
Mehta Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 9:42 PM
Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Teddy
Kimathi Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 12:39 AM
Thank you again Dr. Ram Mehta.
Andresen Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 3:09 PM
- Congratulations Teddy, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 12:38 AM
I really appreciate your kind words, Anne. :-)
Mehta Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 8:59 AM
beautiful allegorical write
Kimathi Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 1:37 AM
Thank you sir.
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