Debbie Guzzi Poet Couplet

Diamonds In the Snow

The wind has fallen, out of bluster, sun ices the sky
upon the crust of frozen snow diadems arise. 

Glittering crowns crest maple trees, diamond on the bough
they bring a beauty and a peace no soul can disavow.

The wind has fallen, out of bluster, sun ices the sky
twinkling like diamond remnants, snow lends the day surprise.

Glittering crowns crest maple trees, diamond on the bough
oh how I hate to hear the roar of the coming plough.

Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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Matthew Anish February 17, 2014 at 5:01 PM There are positive and negative aspects to winter as you show so clearly. Stay warm and keep writing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Robert Pettit January 26, 2014 at 7:51 PM Nice set of rhyming couplets describing typical winter scenery.

Juliet Ligon January 19, 2014 at 7:12 PM Lovely to look at the snow with sun glaring in it like diamonds. Beautiful poem, Debbie. Congrats!

Donna Jones January 17, 2014 at 8:17 PM Yes....I like the clear roads...but don't they leave behind a dirty yukky mess! Wonderful win Debbie..congratulations

Jon A Cavanaugh January 16, 2014 at 10:30 PM Very good. Congratulations on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 16, 2014 at 11:57 AM many congrats debs xx

Carrie Richards January 15, 2014 at 1:13 PM Loved the look outside your window........big congratulations to you, Deb !!

Sara Kendrick January 15, 2014 at 9:07 AM Way to go with this great winnin work..Congrats..Sara

Richard Lamoureux January 15, 2014 at 8:41 AM I enjoyed rereading your winning poem. Congratulations.

Sue K Green January 15, 2014 at 8:37 AM Enjoyed your poem. Very expressive. Congrats on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 14, 2014 at 9:31 PM Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Deb

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2014 at 6:06 PM wow, Debs. I love this one. Outstanding and a well deserved win!

Joseph May January 14, 2014 at 4:49 PM "Sun ices the sky"...love it..congrats on your big win

Olusegun Arowolo January 14, 2014 at 4:34 PM Wonderful write,Debbie..Congrats on your win...And thanks on for your comment and correction of my Haiku.......Light and love...

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2014 at 2:54 PM - Congratulations, Debbie on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 7, 2014 at 10:09 AM with this shimmer, we don't want to plough...lovely word scenes.debbie.. huggs

Monterey Sirak January 6, 2014 at 6:47 AM Beautiful images of a pure snowy world. In your comment on my poem you asked where I was hiding. I was blessed to have all six grandchildren with me for the holidays. I immersed myself in the joy of them and kept the world at bay.

Just That Archaic Poet January 5, 2014 at 8:56 AM Great piece, Debbie; enjoyed this very much. Read it several times. Love your style and craftsmanship with words. Kudos, my friend :) Debbie Guzzi January 5, 2014 at 9:16 AM Thank you Chan nice to hear from you.

Richard Lamoureux January 4, 2014 at 1:52 PM The snow can look like a million diamonds. I enjoyed your Couplet Debbie. I hope you are having a good weekend.

... Gigno January 4, 2014 at 9:22 AM !!!

Len Gasun January 4, 2014 at 1:29 AM Excellent piece and image my dear friend Debbie (I'm sorry for calling you before in short cut, Deb). I like/love your poem so much. A winner for sure. Thank u so much for sharing your precious gem to me this afternoon. May I also take this opportunity to thank you for my placement in your contest. I've enjoyed it & thanks also for the inspiration to write a story. More blessings! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 3, 2014 at 11:52 PM Hi Debbie! Enjoyed reading your take to this, how you made everything bejeweled, very nice. Happy 2014 to you!

Russell Sivey January 3, 2014 at 10:37 PM Wow, you have surely written a tremendous write here my friend! I loved how awesome you made this cold poem! The frigidness is spectacular and illustriously portrayed! I really enjoyed reading this majestic piece this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!

Carrie Richards January 3, 2014 at 7:37 PM ps........I'm so grateful for you choosing my Santa poem, Debbie......thank you very much....it is my honor to win in your contest, and do well from your eyes perspective! Thank you!

Carrie Richards January 3, 2014 at 7:35 PM I am shivering just thinking of how cold you must be on this below freezing night (of the big storm)! Hope you are staying cozy and warm, dear Deb......and hope those nasty ploughs can dig you out....diamonds or no diamonds!!

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