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Diamonds In The Sky

I catch my breath as I disappear into the depths of the sky. Gazing upward I feel a tear shining my cheek as I cry. A diamond's remnants drift on down to sparkle my doorway. Crystalized light to take my frown and find a smile for the day. Mountain majesty, azure peaks- this picture that brings me grace. A wonderment that to me speaks when I've another day to face. As daylight ebbs the crescent moon sparkles like jewels up high. Starry tapestry unfolds soon collecting diamonds in the sky. written by Deb Wilson January 9th, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/17/2014 8:48:00 PM
Wonderful win....mountains do bring that awesome feeling of being small..or as you say....grace...congratulations on your win Deb
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Date: 1/16/2014 12:01:00 PM
many congrats deb xx
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:03:00 AM
A lovely piece Deb..I especially love the last stanza. congrats. BG
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:40:00 PM
Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Deb
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Date: 1/14/2014 3:06:00 PM
- Congratulations Deb, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2014 6:52:00 PM
magical, deb.... you paint radiant artwords so effortlessly!.. huggs
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Date: 1/9/2014 1:05:00 PM
Deb- this poem captures the beauty of winter and the ability to see beyond the inconveniences brought on by winter. Wonderful poem..barbaraboyd
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Date: 1/9/2014 6:22:00 AM
This is a perfect entry into Gail's contest, I really enjoyed reading this elaborate poem here this morning! What a glorious piece my friend, a harmonious poem you have written! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/9/2014 4:22:00 AM
- Deb, thank you for your beautiful poem: "Diamonds In The Sky". - I wish you good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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